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by OneSweetSin

Comment by GarrickStaggs:
I think this looks like someone carrying a child...you can just see the head of the child to the left of the image...that's what I see...and if you turn your head sideways it looks like a turtle on a surboard...sometimes I think my parents did too much antacid in the 60's.

Window Shopping at the Antique Shop
by OneSweetSin

Comment by canonS400:
I wonder if a polarizer would have eliminated the window reflection of the background.

In For Repairs
by OneSweetSin

Comment by StevePax:
Nice detail. The lower left is too shaded, and it draws my attention.

Window Shopping at the Antique Shop
by OneSweetSin

Comment by pepsipepsibaby:
cute!

The Rings of Eternity
by OneSweetSin

Comment by Diversq:
<--Critique Club -->

Hello Sweet Sin,

I like this photo overall. The certificate in the back and the rings look good and I like the texture of the paper a well.

I have to agree with some of the other comments however about the photo being kind of flat. Its not necessarily a bad thing but I think if you had adjusted the angle a bit down and to the left, it may have given more depth to the certificate.

The cropping is just a bit tight for my taste. I would like to see a bit more space next to the M on the left. Not centering matrimony but just giving a bit more room for it.

As an after thought perhaps you could show the color of the rings against the cert. Maybe getting a gleem or something.

I do like the photo and if you decide to shoot this again trying some different angles and lighting, I would like to see what you come up with, so PM if you do.

Good luck on future challenges.

Diversq

Message edited by author 2003-07-25 10:24:59.

Light and Dark
by OneSweetSin

Comment by robsmith:
Noisy sky and halo around the building. Might have been worth trying to shoot from the other side to illuminate the bulding more.

074re.jpg
by OneSweetSin

Comment by KissakiMan:
I can see it. Nice idea!

Message edited by author 2003-07-25 02:31:55.

074re.jpg
by OneSweetSin

Comment by cykhansen:
Looks like a cloud to me.

074re.jpg
by OneSweetSin

Comment by OneSweetSin:
Look closely at this photo the cloud in the center of the photo appears to be a head of possibly a curly haired child, moving slightly to the left and down are a pair of wings. It appears to have a large tummy which as you sit and look at it closer a teddy bear appears in it.

Window Shopping at the Antique Shop
by OneSweetSin

Comment by pottersclay75:
good shot.. its a little busy. no apparent, central subject