Light
by Mona

Comment by melismatica:
There isn't a lot going on here. There is good use of negative and positive space and the colors harmonize but the grainy quality isn't working hard enough and those hot spots are just distracting.

Light
by Mona

Comment by shelleyspray:
idea was good but focal point is hard to see

Light
by Mona

Comment by lockjawdavis:
Nice forms, but I'd reconsider the border.

Light
by Mona

Comment by L1:
The colors are nice, but the very bright spots are more of a distraction than a part of the whole.

Light
by Mona

Comment by Beastman:
You know if I closed my eyes and turned around this might be a good picture and also if I was on LSD. F-

In The Middle Of My Town
by Mona

Comment by jpochard:
That's a cool little cottage. Too bad about the red car on the right...I think it's distracting.

Wood Wheel And Sun Wheel
by Mona

Comment by Imagineer:
I think this conveys everything you intended - a rustic little watermill, nestling in a tranquil setting in beautiful sunshine. Whilst not being perfect (the overexposed grass being it's most prominent problem) it's a lovely record of this scene.

I feel that the inclusion of the glistening plant in the foreground very much contributes to the sense of being a secret viewer here and would have been significantly less atmospheric without it.

In The Middle Of My Town
by Mona

Comment by Cam:
What a cute little house, pretty photo.

Everything in nature has the right proportion.
by Mona

Comment by MinAlex:
love the depth of field

Everything in nature has the right proportion.
by Mona

Comment by melismatica:
This would have been far more effective if you had removed the distracting stems---the one directly behind the flower and the one pointing to it from the left edge of the frame. Also, it looks like you focused on the foliage rather than the flower.