Right Down the Middle
by levyj413

Comment by noraneko:
Excellent entry, Jeffrey! I'm sorry I didn't get to this one while voting, I'm sure I would have given it a very decent score. You do the architecture thing so well...

Going Home
by levyj413

Comment by krnodil:
Not a bad looking place to have to be when you're not at home! Nice mystery in the darker parts and the overall coloring has a nostalgic quality to it, although I'll admit I would prefer the backpack were not there - too distracting.

And I really like the inclusion of motion blur for the human part of this shot - for me, it emphasizes the ephemeral quality of human life just "passing through" these solid examples of classic architecture.

Going Home
by levyj413

Comment by jaysonmc:
Nice lines and a terrific idea to incorporate a person to bring some interest to the photo. I really like the movement created here, it helps with the entire image. Nice lighting and post work.

Going Home
by levyj413

Comment by posthumous:
I disagree that this is second. this is your most artsy-fartsy photo yet. you are totally infected, dude... and this stuff is VERY hard to get out of your system!

Going Home
by levyj413

Comment by bmartuch:
Jeffrey, this is a fantastic shot. I think the person being out of focus hurts it some. I'm not sure I would have even had a person in the shot. The composition and the colors are great.

Right Down the Middle
by levyj413

Comment by RPvanderHilst:
Not sure about the cropping (might take off a little from the top), but then again the color gradient is cool too.. -7-

Going Home
by levyj413

Comment by meyers:
I really like the contrast of the blurred guy against the sharp hallway. The blue backpack looks a little weird, but goes well with the title.

Cartwheel in Three Acts
by levyj413

Comment by krnodil:
I like how you carried her tumbling movement across the frames - for the subject of cartwheels that was a very nice touch. I think sometimes with "progress"-type triptychs the framing can have the effect of periods when they should be more like commas - what you did with the framing here made them into commas (if what I just said makes any sense at all let me know!).

Going Home
by levyj413

Comment by posthumous:
an angel in the architecture. 8

Cartwheel in Three Acts
by levyj413

Comment by rinac:
I really liked this piece, gave it an 8. Thought the image overlap was a wonderful idea for such a spirited story. Great stuff :)