Enchanted Satin
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Comment by whiterook:
Too washout

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Comment by bjuicephoto:
ooo this is one of my favorites so far. love it

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Comment by hotpasta:
lovely...I love the blue tones and your composition for this 8

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Comment by newgolem:
very simpl and interesting

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Comment by timfythetoo:
Greetings from the Critique Club -

A creative idea for sure, but obviously not what the DPC community was looking for. I am pretty sure you know what the issues here are. The big goose head is painfully out of focus and the general setup is a bit out there. But it does look like you had fun with it. You actually did a pretty good job with the merging of the geese into the clouds. Pretty clean PS work.

That said, even though the FS was expert ruleset that doesn't mean that you had to use the expert ruleset on your entry. I think most of the higher scoring images with a couple of exceptions were advanced legal.

Looking through your portfolio I can see you do nice work. Dont let this one get you down. I loko forward to seeing your future entries.

Tim

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Comment by crayon:
very cute :)
especially more after reading your side of the story about this picture, and daddy goose there, lol

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Comment by adeldegan:
Too bad the front goose isn't in focus.

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Comment by Chinarosepetal:
It's interesting, but I can't really understand what you're trying to portray. Are these migrating geese that have stopped on a cloud top to refuel? What is the purpose of the large out of focus, in your face, goose?:)

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Comment by Haneck:
This is a really cool idea, but I think it would be much nicer if the front goose was in focus. Good try though!

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Comment by ericwoo:
I think that it is just a hair overdone. Bring the reds down and the blues up just a little, like 5-10%. Here is what I got using your edited version.