LOOKS LIKE AN EARLY SATURDAY NIGHTby
brimacComment by scarbrd: ---Greetings from the Critique Club!---
First impression - Looks like it was shot on the floor.
This is a good idea that needed better execution. Had you set up the shot on a card table with some chips, drinks, ash trays with cigars, etc, this would have scored much higher IMO.
Picture this with the green felt of the table, a stack or 2 of chips and pile of chips in the middle, some smoke wafting through the air . . .
I can see a lot of potential with this idea.
Technically the shot is very strong. Nice motion blur and sharpness in the non-moving elements. Angle is good, so is the lighting.
All that is needed here is a little more time to set up the shot.
I hope this was helpful. Feel free to contact me if you have any questions.
David