A Look into Perfection
by fotomann_forever

Comment by nutzito:
beautiful expodure

Fair Maiden
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Comment by ursula:
Leroy? Quite beautiful, very soft, gentle, and yet her face looks quite earthy in a way. Love the toning. The earring/choker work wonders here. I wish the right breast (the one in back) didn't get lost quite as much into the background, makes it look abnormally small and thin compared to the rest of her. She's beautiful. ~9

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Comment by jfwolpert:
the pose is not very attractive but ther lighting is nice

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Comment by Falc:
Harsh lighting and shadows, really don't do much for this girl. The pose too is a little unflattering

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Comment by e301:
Flash is very heavy here - those nasty shadows from the hand and the nose could effectively be softened and produce a smoother image overall. It seems an odd pose to have chosen - either as a pose or as a chosen moment by you.

A Look into Perfection
by fotomann_forever

Comment by yanko:
Very nice portrait. The lighting, focus, color and POV are all top notch. I'm just not sure about her cleavage line with the way it enters the frame but it does appear to strengthed the diagonal composition. However you already have a good diagonal going so I think a tighter crop from the bottom would have worked better or perhaps adding a soft vignette to diffuse the shadow from the clevage. Anyway, just a thought.

Fair Maiden
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Comment by noraneko:
Bravo with taking a risk and photographing a model who doesn't meet the traditional physique type. She is lovely and the photo has just the right amount of softness and great composition.

Fair Maiden
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Comment by rinac:
A beautiful woman, there's no doubt. I love the effect the post work plays on her face and hair. Wonderfully soft but crisp at the same time. Great job on that. The issue that lets this image down though, as I see it, is the severity of the clipping around her right breast. It appears as though suspended in mid air as the texture and form of her torso has completely disappeared. I can't seem to get past that once my attention is drawn to it. :(

Fair Maiden
by fotomann_forever

Comment by Augie:
too misty

A Look into Perfection
by fotomann_forever

Comment by Noel_ZH:
Plus: Soft
Minus: Can't really feel the diagonal
Score: 5