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01/22/2007 09:59:16 AM |
Very underappreciated IMO. Great exposure; pushes the highlight limits on her forehead yet the skintones are lovely. I LOVE the fact that she has such soft curves (yes even on her face) and yet the diagonals are there: the alignment of her nose with her cleavage; the shadows under those high cheekbones; the tilt of her head even gives her upper lip a bit of an incline :)
My biggest gripe with the image is the lower left portion of the photo... is that her arm? No suggestion for improvement as shot however, I just think it's distracting.
Great shot Leroy, and yes I agree with you, she's lovely. |
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12/03/2006 02:54:38 PM |
Very good natural diagonal lines. Beautiful image. The lock of hair at the left is a bit distracting, in the sense that when I first looked at the image, it looked like a shadow (it is quite similar to her cleavage shadow), and I thought there was a hand or something on her shoulder. Her smile is just beautiful! ~9 |
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12/02/2006 11:59:55 AM |
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11/30/2006 06:22:47 PM |
Very nice portrait. The lighting, focus, color and POV are all top notch. I'm just not sure about her cleavage line with the way it enters the frame but it does appear to strengthed the diagonal composition. However you already have a good diagonal going so I think a tighter crop from the bottom would have worked better or perhaps adding a soft vignette to diffuse the shadow from the clevage. Anyway, just a thought. |
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11/29/2006 12:45:49 PM |
Plus: Soft
Minus: Can't really feel the diagonal
Score: 5 |
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