The Gambler
by fotomann_forever

Comment by coolblue:
on arm bandits are the curse of the world, not a bad picture though. the B/W adds the candid press look.

Why Wait for a Mammogram?
by fotomann_forever

Comment by JJWoolls:
A little too overexposed on the face.....I think I would also like to see a little more of her face, maybe some emotion (Worry, fear, exhaustion.... Something) Good idea though.

I am not a good photographer, I do not claim to be better than anyone, any criticism is meant to be constructive criticism......

Why Wait for a Mammogram?
by fotomann_forever

Comment by pawdrix:
I looks like the side of her face is either blownout (perhaps only on my monitor?) or just unevenly overexposed. Hard to tell whether that was an artistic choice or "bad technicals". I'll assume the best. 10

Why Wait for a Mammogram?
by fotomann_forever

Comment by usgpindy:
Maybe some softer lighting.

Why Wait for a Mammogram?
by fotomann_forever

Comment by HaikuSailor:
Thank you! Great message, wonderful photo!

Why Wait for a Mammogram?
by fotomann_forever

Comment by alexjack:
lighting is harsh on her face and shoulder, i think you could have does as well cropping down on this one - at least as it relates to your title.

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Jack

Why Wait for a Mammogram?
by fotomann_forever

Comment by kenskid:
Unique way to get a breast in a challenge! BTW...I do like the message though.

Why Wait for a Mammogram?
by fotomann_forever

Comment by smardaz:
nice one foto...

The Gambler
by fotomann_forever

Comment by BobsterLobster:
I would have prefered the focus on the gambler rather than the fruit machine. The background is definitely too cluttered which spoils the composition. The crop could be much tighter by removing the bottom of the shot. The face of the gambler is currently too high in the frame. The expression isn't amazing, this could be any fruit machine with any gambler at any point. The skill is to capture something a little unusual... a special moment.

Matthew 4:19 - Follow me, and I will make you fishers of men.
by fotomann_forever

Comment by angela_packard:
so i think you should have scored way higher than some of the others....but maybe i am just biased!