Overpainted
by kiwiness

Comment by dsa157:
very clever and crisply composed

Overpainted
by kiwiness

Comment by C-Fox:
Well done picture. Really like the colors and the lines.

He never came!
by kiwiness

Comment by Imagineer:
That's the worst reaction to a sexual anticlimax I've ever seen! ;D

Good tones and composition if a little too uncomfortable for the viewer - being too close to the subject. This means one scrutinises details that are irrelevant to the shot. I can understand the idea but it does look too staged.

He never came!
by kiwiness

Comment by timmi:
Very good sad portrait. The skin looks really good and soft. Great diagonal composition. I would have included more space above her and on the right for better balance.

He never came!
by kiwiness

Comment by vadvirag:
Beautiful, talking shot!

He never came!
by kiwiness

Comment by Neuferland:
This would be a nightmare for the bride no doubt. The smeared makeup, the runny nose really add to the shot and make it that much more realistic, I hope it wasn't real! The anguish on her face and the clenched fists really finish this portrait for me.

He never came!
by kiwiness

Comment by mubrin:
Sad her but photo is excellent.Congrat

He never came!
by kiwiness

Comment by ss:
Technically a very good portrait. I find the set-up a bit "too-much" to express this otherwise very good idea. Her facial expression and body language is almost enough, perhaps with few tears on the cheek. This heavy make-up is just over the edge. Also I find it a bit tightly cropped on the left - I'd have like to see the shoulder. But this is nitpicking - great picture! 9.

He never came!
by kiwiness

Comment by Sherry March:
This is really a wonderful photograph. I surely hope it was staged and this heartbreaking nightmare didn't really happen. Beautiful lighting and color and excellent composition.

He never came!
by kiwiness

Comment by joecase:
Great job of catching the emotion.