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by alexjack

Comment by digidori:
THe texture of her skin seems inconsistent. The focus is a little confusing too. While the eyes and teeth are sharp the nose is blurry.

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by alexjack

Comment by unneva:
Well green is my favourite colour but I don't like the lighting on her face, it just draws attention to the wrong places.

yellow
by alexjack

Comment by colorcarnival:
Pretty. I like the dark background - really helps the yellow pop out of the pic. Personally, I would like to have seen just a little bit more cropped off the right side.

yellow
by alexjack

Comment by karmat:
Nice contrast

yellow
by alexjack

Comment by animal_lover:
love!

Day 10 B&W - Hey Mom!
by alexjack

Comment by sevilduvarci:
i love this. such a sweet little moment you captured :)

Peek a Boo B&W
by alexjack

Comment by rinac:
I much prefer this. The background colour was a little distracting in the other. Feels like it's on a lean though. Maybe a slight clockwise rotation needed?

Potato Lake, Wisconsin
by alexjack

Comment by boyd2000:
Is this a coastal area? Beautiful trees, weeds and reflections. Technically very good.

Potato Lake, Wisconsin
by alexjack

Comment by SueW:
Seascape?

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by alexjack

Comment by atupdate:
Hello from the Critique Club,

The post processing of this image is well done and there is no doubt that this entry meets the challenge. Where this challenge entry misses the mark for me is two fold. First, there really isn't a main subject to help anchor this image besides the color. As the viewer's eyes move around the image there is nothing that holds their attention for any length of time. Second, there are so many layers to this image, the flowers, the box, and the window, that it looks cluttered. Another byproduct of not having a main subject in the composition.

I'm glad I received this image to critique, as it gave me the opportunity to take another look at your portfolio. I remember critiquing your Triptych II and I like the additions you've made to your portfolio since that critique. Feel free to PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique.

Tim