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Challenge: Burst of Color II (Basic Editing)
Camera: Nikon D70
Lens: Nikon AF Zoom-Nikkor 70-300mm f/4.0-5.6D ED
Location: Red Wing, MN
Date: Jun 24, 2007
Aperture: f11
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/6 sec
Galleries: Architecture
Date Uploaded: Jun 24, 2007

Window of a local shop, early in morning before any shoppers.Typical basic processing, levels, curves, hue and sat, resized, sharpened, saved for web.

Statistics
Place: 104 out of 286
Avg (all users): 5.6935
Avg (commenters): 6.8571
Avg (participants): 5.4921
Avg (non-participants): 5.7967
Views since voting: 598
Views during voting: 245
Votes: 186
Comments: 9
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07/10/2007 07:51:02 AM
Hello from the Critique Club,

The post processing of this image is well done and there is no doubt that this entry meets the challenge. Where this challenge entry misses the mark for me is two fold. First, there really isn't a main subject to help anchor this image besides the color. As the viewer's eyes move around the image there is nothing that holds their attention for any length of time. Second, there are so many layers to this image, the flowers, the box, and the window, that it looks cluttered. Another byproduct of not having a main subject in the composition.

I'm glad I received this image to critique, as it gave me the opportunity to take another look at your portfolio. I remember critiquing your Triptych II and I like the additions you've made to your portfolio since that critique. Feel free to PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique.

Tim
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07/04/2007 12:40:14 AM
This is very cool!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/03/2007 12:47:32 AM
Very pretty. I would have cropped just a bit closer to take off the remaining letters.
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07/01/2007 12:37:00 PM
Interesting!
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06/27/2007 11:47:57 PM
Now this certainly is a burst of color. Great compostion. Good eye!
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06/27/2007 10:58:02 AM
Great image. Love the composition and the colors. However, there is so much color that nothing really stands out as being the subject.
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06/27/2007 08:11:46 AM
Oh-la-la, color bursts! Very nice composition with different geometric shapes to heighten the appeal.
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06/27/2007 01:04:30 AM
Nice sharp image, great color. The "TS" is perplexing and degrades the image because it looks like the first part of a word was cut off? 6
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06/27/2007 12:07:17 AM
TONS of color, but there's so much it defeats the point of the challenge, to isolate the background and subject using color.
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