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KronusComment by karmat: CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat (In honor of hbunch's 500th critique. :) )
Wow! Hard to believe another football season is approaching.
Compositionally, this shot feels a little too "skinny" for me. While I think the vertical crop works well to isolate and emphasize the player, and what looks to be a "jump," it feels choppy and leaves me thinking that I am missing something that is just outside of the frame. Also, it gives the feeling that he is falling out of the frame very quickly. If it had been possible, I think having more space in front of him would have made the picture feel a bit more stable and "complete."
Technically, the colors are okay, if a bit *drab* (That is not exactly the right word I want, because I don't think you need anymore saturation), and it appears flat to me. Would a touch more contrast help this? You've caught the motion blur well, and I fully suspect that some may have voted it down because it was all blurry.
Overall, you have an excellent subject and met the challenge well. From my experience with dpc, I would strongly suspect that your score "suffered" because there was nothing in the picture that was "in focus" and therefore, there was nothing for the eye to "rest" on.