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07/12/2006 03:44:01 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
First Impression:
Ooh! I love macros! Love all the little hairy fuzzies on the flower, and how only one row of them is focused.
Composition/Background:
I think the black background works well here. With anything in the background, the little hairs (I really don't know what else to call them) wouldn't have stood out as well. My eye tends to wander around the focused areas of the shot around the greener part of the flower, and then to the leaf, but tends to avoid the brighter spot on the right. It took me a while to even see that the hairs went all the way up to the top.
Technicals:
I think my biggest issue technically is that bright white spot. I like the lighting you used, it just got a bit bright in that one spot. Perhaps a slightly faster shutter speed would have helped? Or maybe a very pastel color of flower?
Post Processing:
I think the crop you used works for what you started with. If you had left more to the right, it appears as if you may have left a dull grey which would have been unappealing. My only suggestion might be to rotate the shot slightly counter-clockwise to make the flower at more of an diagonal across the frame. Then again, without seeing it, I could be wrong.
Overall:
It looks like this shot was fairly well received by the voters with its score and the great comments. I didn't vote in this challenge, but probably would have given it a 7.
If you have any questions or comments, please feel free to PM me. |
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07/09/2006 10:29:54 PM |
| one of my favorites this challenge -- like the fuzzy and backlit bloom |
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07/09/2006 05:35:49 PM |
| This composition makes for a very interesting abstract! 8 |
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07/07/2006 03:46:46 PM |
| this is very nice. I like the up-close view because it allows me to see all the fine details. I really like the choice of background- it works well with the brightness of the white part of the flower. |
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07/07/2006 12:12:40 AM |
| I really like this effect..... |
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07/06/2006 10:16:20 PM |
| WOW!!! Absolutely Amazing!!! |
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07/06/2006 01:02:17 PM |
| Gorgeous detail and lighting. |
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07/05/2006 10:26:04 PM |
| What an interesting view! Lovely detail. |
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07/05/2006 05:02:11 PM |
| Great photo. Colors are really nice. Great job! |
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07/04/2006 10:39:16 PM |
| Technically, it's a good photo, but it just doesn't do anything for me. Sorry. |
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07/04/2006 08:12:29 PM |
| Ahhh, aren't petunias beautiful against the light, they're so hairy! I think this is a rather gutsy entry. Love the composition, and I think you managed to control the light quite well. Good luck in the challenge :) (8) |
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07/04/2006 04:53:07 PM |
| 7 - Nice macro and detail, good use of light. Overall, just seems slightly off balance, perhaps a variation in the composition and crop, may have given this even more of an edge. |
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07/04/2006 02:46:38 PM |
| Very cool macro! One of the best I've seen so far. |
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07/04/2006 04:53:33 AM |
| I keep coming back to this. It's unusual. I wish it had more height to the image for some reason, maybe with more negative space. I love the little hairs of the bloom but I'm missing the edge of the entire flower. Still a lovely backlit beauty. |
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07/03/2006 11:54:24 PM |
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07/03/2006 07:12:49 PM |
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07/03/2006 06:23:18 PM |
| Interesting take on the challenge. The colors are very dramatic. |
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07/03/2006 01:37:51 PM |
| Outstanding lighting and detail. |
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07/03/2006 11:08:29 AM |
| Beautiful! Soft but sharp. Fantastic lighting. Excellent! |
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