Through a Glass Darklyby
xianartComment by kari1: ::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
I love your first statement ... yup cold nudd .. and all that ... I though during voting that this was great .. and now am shown and hopefully you are that it was a fantastic idea and you pulled it off.
Composition:
I really like how you have utilised the window to make the four componants of the picture. With each of the componants having their own piece of the puzzle ... this creates a wonderful illusion.
Subject:
Meets and exceeds the challenge.
Technical (Colour and light):
the colour is good .. the lighting is well done ... I think the frame utilisaion works well. The comments you have recieved sum up other thoughts.
To grow its vote?:
Well this is interesting question ... this sort of shot works for some but not all .. but that can be said of ALL photos which are processed. I don't get the ones and twos ... but hey there are only three of them ... I think we call them trolls ... and then the anti art people will come in ... technically a good shot .. I think you choose the right panal to be clear ... Personally I think that this is great.
Summary:
Love it .. keep it up .. can't wait to see more. Does this pave the way for an exit from team suck????
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari
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