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Comment by alexjack:
I like this photography and this type of photography in general, so I hope this does well. From a techinical standpoint only a few problems - the most telling is the distortion on the building and the lack of vertical lines on the R, the window seems vertical to the pipe but not to R side of the picture. Also a bit contrasty on his face, plus the white box behind the man is a problem. From a compostional standpoint you really have 4 separate ideas, each pulling the viewer and each pulling the viewer out of the picture - the man facing and walking out, the window half finished, the large non-finished rectangle in the lower R, and the lamp in the upper L. In order for the picutre to really work they either need to tell a story or they need to be equally powerful to keep the viewer coming back to the others. I don't quite get your story here, and I'm not sure about the power of each idea, but I really like your effort.

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Comment by Judi:
Nice tones but the focus should also be on the man.

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Comment by AdrienneGC:
Very interesting

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Comment by sevilduvarci:
i love the composition in this. the cracks and peeled up paint add a very nice texture. good one.

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Comment by Car54:
i like the editorial feel to this. the textures and tones work well.

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Comment by Jutilda:
Excellent composition. Wonderful tones too. I like it. 7

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Comment by mia67:
Fantastic composition here, love it, love your style.

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Comment by mia67:
Great shot, lighting is amazing ( like always in your photos), and you manage to capture her character too. Excellent!!!

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Comment by downtherabbithole:
wow, I think that is very powerful. I think it may be a tad dark, use those levels to bring some brightness into it and the impact would be much bigger. this really is great as is too though, I would love to see it printed 30 by 40!

great job

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Comment by pineapple:
Certainly lovely. Glad you had the guts to enter it too (not everyone would). Congrats on the Oobie.