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Comment by edmeng:
Nice capture, 8

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Comment by abranton:
I am not sure if the man adds to this photo or not..seems like too much space between but ok photo.

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Comment by Dirt_Diver:
Great B&W.

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Comment by JeffDay:
interesting image, I enjoy this 7

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Comment by alexjack:
I like this photography and this type of photography in general, so I hope this does well. From a techinical standpoint only a few problems - the most telling is the distortion on the building and the lack of vertical lines on the R, the window seems vertical to the pipe but not to R side of the picture. Also a bit contrasty on his face, plus the white box behind the man is a problem. From a compostional standpoint you really have 4 separate ideas, each pulling the viewer and each pulling the viewer out of the picture - the man facing and walking out, the window half finished, the large non-finished rectangle in the lower R, and the lamp in the upper L. In order for the picutre to really work they either need to tell a story or they need to be equally powerful to keep the viewer coming back to the others. I don't quite get your story here, and I'm not sure about the power of each idea, but I really like your effort.

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Comment by Judi:
Nice tones but the focus should also be on the man.

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Comment by AdrienneGC:
Very interesting

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Comment by sevilduvarci:
i love the composition in this. the cracks and peeled up paint add a very nice texture. good one.

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Comment by Car54:
i like the editorial feel to this. the textures and tones work well.

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Comment by Jutilda:
Excellent composition. Wonderful tones too. I like it. 7