matri-131.jpg
by renefunk

Comment by Jutilda:
Wonderful perspective. I love the circular sense of her gown's skirt!!

matri-131.jpg
by renefunk

Comment by Sunniee:
Her right eye looks a tad odd... something in the post procesing perhaps? Like the perspective, and the colors... face looks a tad soft, again... could be the post processing or saving for web... overall nice job

matri-131.jpg
by renefunk

Comment by hotpasta:
stunning...fabulous...what a beautiful bride...love the vantage point

cabezonazo.jpg
by renefunk

Comment by alfresco:
What a cute potato pooch!!! :)

And a great model!!

Purple Dream
by renefunk

Comment by violinist123:
Shoulda scored higher!

Force
by renefunk

Comment by talj:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

First of all congratulations on your second highest scoring image :o)

Composition:

I really like your composition, the 'ball' and hand are placed nicely in the frame and the lines of 'electricity' have worked with you well here! The only thing I may have been tempted to change is in the bottom right handside you can see what appears to be the base of the 'ball' and for me the image would be even better if you cropped this out.

Technicals:

This is very well exposed with no blown out parts on the lights in the 'ball'. The lighting on the top of the hand is nice as is the blue lighting underneath and you have captured some good detail in the hand.

My personal thought:

This challenge featured a few shots using a similar prop and I feel that this maybe why your shot didn't score better.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

- Natalya :o)

Message edited by author 2006-10-03 19:37:50.

Purple Dream
by renefunk

Comment by RyShu:
Beautiful color, tone and composition

Purple Dream
by renefunk

Comment by photoslik1967:
Good job. I vote an 8.

Purple Dream
by renefunk

Comment by violinist123:
Lighting is so so, pose isn't that great. Composition needs a little work.

No flowers and nice boobs.

Have a 10.

Purple Dream
by renefunk

Comment by Brett1210:
Absolutely incredible, beautiful image. LOVE IT!