On the go...
by zerocusa

Comment by marbo:
So bright and punchy it nearly took my eye out. Border also works well.8

On the go...
by zerocusa

Comment by shadow:
This looks familiar.....hey, our national car on the highway! drop me a note. Anyway, looks a tad over-exposed. May look ok for a postcard, but doesn't really shout out much.

On the go...
by zerocusa

Comment by bobgaither:
but your driving on the wrong side of the road

On the go...
by zerocusa

Comment by pncowley:
The border has to go on this one. It's takes away from your picture. I think this is a good picture of transportation. I like your angle and those gorgeous trees on the left. Nicely done.

Drenched!
by zerocusa

Comment by Gracious:
Greetings from the Critique Club
This image meets the challenge of weather without any doubt. I like that I can actually see the rain, and the movement of the person establishes that he is moving fast to get to a dry spot, probably his car. He is in a good place in the composition, since he has plenty of space ahead of him for movement. That's good!
The foreground shows some bike handle bars. They are distracting and don't really help the image any. They could easily be cropped out.
The cars don't contribute much to the artistic elements of this picture. A fence or trees would have been more appealing, to me.
The greenery that IS in the picture adds lovely color.
I hope to see more of your work here on DPC. Keep shooting! :-)
Regards,

Grayce

Limited Edition (Renewed rivalry)
by zerocusa

Comment by karmat:
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat

COMPOSITION
I really like the way you have positioned the cans. It adds interest to the shot, as well as balance. Nice sized crop as well.

TECHNIQUE
Great focus. The cans are very clear, and the details on them are outstanding. This was a neat effect with the colors, adn definitely made me do a take a second look. I do think a smooth background would have been less distracting, though the white was an excellent choice. If you could have somehow prevented the "reflection" of color on the cloth, which probably became more noticeable after post-processing, I think it would have been even more effective. The light spots are a bit distracting, as they make the cans look "hot" in some spots. If you do not have lights with a diffuser, sometimes a thin piece of paper (tissue, papertowel, etc.) can work, or perhaps moving the lights further back.

OVERALL EFFECT
A great idea, executed nicely. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Best to you in future challenges.
karmat

Drenched!
by zerocusa

Comment by pncowley:
Now that's a rainstorm! :) Shot would be improved, in my opinion, if the shot did not include the objects in the foreground (motorbikes?).

Drenched!
by zerocusa

Comment by cannonshooter:
quite a rain storm. Good show of motion and the rain, the right side is underexposed too much

Drenched!
by zerocusa

Comment by Harz_Joerg:
I like that one very much because it acctually depicts rain and is not set up artificially. The falling raindrops are percect and the blurred person fits very well. Only the bikes in front disturbe a little. good luck to you

Drenched!
by zerocusa

Comment by drydoc:
Yes! Finally, one with weather and its effects! Nicely done.