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04/27/2003 04:52:13 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
This image meets the challenge of weather without any doubt. I like that I can actually see the rain, and the movement of the person establishes that he is moving fast to get to a dry spot, probably his car. He is in a good place in the composition, since he has plenty of space ahead of him for movement. That's good!
The foreground shows some bike handle bars. They are distracting and don't really help the image any. They could easily be cropped out.
The cars don't contribute much to the artistic elements of this picture. A fence or trees would have been more appealing, to me.
The greenery that IS in the picture adds lovely color.
I hope to see more of your work here on DPC. Keep shooting! :-)
Regards,
Grayce |
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04/20/2003 08:12:07 PM |
| Now that's a rainstorm! :) Shot would be improved, in my opinion, if the shot did not include the objects in the foreground (motorbikes?). |
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04/20/2003 01:22:45 PM |
| quite a rain storm. Good show of motion and the rain, the right side is underexposed too much |
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04/19/2003 04:45:35 AM |
| I like that one very much because it acctually depicts rain and is not set up artificially. The falling raindrops are percect and the blurred person fits very well. Only the bikes in front disturbe a little. good luck to you |
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04/18/2003 03:59:41 PM |
| Yes! Finally, one with weather and its effects! Nicely done. |
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04/17/2003 02:00:54 PM |
| Nice image. I like the action you put in the picture as well. It makes the image more creative. |
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04/17/2003 01:42:13 PM |
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04/16/2003 09:29:24 AM |
| This is the hardest rain I have seen in this challenge, good capture! |
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04/16/2003 08:02:11 AM |
| Good to know someone post pic from Malaysia (am I right?). Good luck! |
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04/15/2003 09:27:30 PM |
| Great idea, and poor sucker. I think I would like to see this with you following the subject for sharp focus and getting a motion blurred background. Would show more of an urgency to get to cover, in my opinion. |
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04/15/2003 08:26:38 PM |
| This certainly captures rain well. The bikes in the foreground are a bit intrusive, but unavoidable in conditions like this. |
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04/15/2003 08:23:49 PM |
| Great shot! Pity of the biciycle stuff in front, works a bit distracting..... |
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04/15/2003 04:19:05 PM |
| great weather! I'd have liked more of the guy being soaked by the rain though, just to give the picture more of a personality. |
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04/15/2003 02:34:20 PM |
| Interesting. I think it would look better if you could have used a faster shutter speed, but lighting conditions probably didn't allow it. Also I think it is too dark on the right. |
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04/15/2003 12:17:04 AM |
| Great shot, it's clear it's a downpour. Kid running by is a nice touch. 8. |
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04/14/2003 03:27:33 PM |
| Nice capture of the falling rain. Too bad that the car had to be there. Would have made for a more eye pleasing background. Maybe could have cropped out the whole right side of the picture. The rain is the most visible on the left where the child is anyway. |
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04/14/2003 03:04:08 PM |
| Tropical shower? :0) I like it. |
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04/14/2003 01:45:17 PM |
| Nice picture, i can almost feel the rain |
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04/14/2003 01:41:14 PM |
| nice idea but the bikes in the foreground dont do anything for the picture |
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04/14/2003 01:06:36 PM |
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04/14/2003 06:12:27 AM |
| You met the challenge very well , good work 10 |
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04/14/2003 05:34:22 AM |
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