Jammy Time
by timfythetoo

Comment by thomaspeople:
I like kid shots. Don't worry about always pleasing the DPC crowd - they're a fickle lot. This is a nice shot and a great model. Your background is actually pretty good for being just a wall - good light. He's a little off-focus below the middle, but his smile is really the point of the shot. Nice job.

Would rather be jumping rope
by timfythetoo

Comment by BakerBug:
Great job! Very dramatic!

Would rather be jumping rope
by timfythetoo

Comment by weisz:
very creative - an 8

Jammy Time
by timfythetoo

Comment by JH:
You captured a great shot here - I really like his expression.

Two things caught my attention on the technical side; The white balance looks wrong, it has a feeling of being too 'warm' like it was shot under incandescent light. Also the crop is a bit strange around his thighs. It's an unusual place to chop him off!

But, I like the simplicity of this.

Would rather be jumping rope
by timfythetoo

Comment by UNTITLED:
I like the selective desat and treatment on this photo. I'm not sure why, but it makes the photo kind of fun(I know sounds stupid). Well done!

Jammy Time
by timfythetoo

Comment by eschelar:
Good use of fifths. It's still a bit to the right, but it's pretty close.

Only complaint from me is that it seems a tiny bit too soft (mostly in the hand) and there's a nasty mark in the BG.

A crop in about 10-15% might have righted the composition (this far to the right almost suggests movement to the right to my eye, but this isn't supported by the picture) and lost the hand. It might have looked a bit weird to have sliced them off, but then it draws the attention to the mirrored faces. Tough call. I don't hate the current crop.

Nice job.

Would rather be jumping rope
by timfythetoo

Comment by Dimy:
Oops just realised this is advanced editing, had to reconsider my vote and comment! Very nice picture!

Jammy Time
by timfythetoo

Comment by Cooz:
Good shot...I like the composition and his expression makes me smile...

Kid shots always suffer on DPC for some reason, but this is well done and should have scored higher

Jammy Time
by timfythetoo

Comment by olddj:
My opinion, I like the position but would try cropping off some of the empty space on left side of pic, leaving that beautiful smile closer to 1/3 from right side. Otherwise, nicely done and underappreciated!

Jacque

Would rather be jumping rope
by timfythetoo

Comment by Jutilda:
Great title. I had thought of something similar myself. Nice focus and the single sat of red really works. 7