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| 07/09/2006 04:04:10 PM |
One year later - "Why is daddy still gone?"by timfythetooComment by kirsty_mcn: I really like the atmosphere this conjures up, especially in the context of the challenge title.
I don't like the centredness of the boy, especially as it isn't exactly centred, but certainly not far enough from the centre to be on a third.
The watch is a subtle addition - I don't know whether I personally would be observant enough to notice straightaway, but thats not to mean it doesn't (even subconciously) add to the composition/atmosphere.
I also find the partial name distracting - I don't know whether it would be better with the full name, or a more common name like "Smith" |
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| 07/09/2006 03:26:51 PM |
4th of July can't come fast enough ($350)by timfythetooComment by kirsty_mcn: Really sorry for how late these critiques are...
I like the composition, with the nicely busy fireworks and the simple head centred horizontally. However, I'd prefer more black empty space around the face, which gets lost.
Other than this, I do like the picture - it's not your best but it has a nice quirkiness to it and very well suited to the challenge. |
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| 07/09/2006 08:21:30 AM |
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| 07/08/2006 10:21:57 PM |
Paper Patterns by timfythetooComment by hopnjohn: Very creative take on the challenge. I like everything except I think the border is too large for such a delicate pattern. |
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| 07/08/2006 03:47:01 PM |
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| 07/08/2006 03:16:34 PM |
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| 07/08/2006 11:56:01 AM |
Paper Patterns by timfythetooComment by sukuriant: I would just like to say, that the design of those rolls is awesome! How did you do this?
My only complaint is that it seems a bit to soft, so it doesn't look like paper anymore... |
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| 07/08/2006 08:27:13 AM |
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| 07/08/2006 07:42:46 AM |
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| 07/07/2006 10:28:42 PM |
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