Koolau Mist
by Cub

Comment by kandyj:
Great shot 8

Koolau Mist
by Cub

Comment by JamieWillmott:
Would have preferred less grass in the foreground.

Koolau Mist
by Cub

Comment by kiwiness:
I can even smell the air. Great!

Reviving a Legend
by Cub

Comment by kandyj:
Would like to see this a bit more sharp, interesting way to deal with current challenge.

Reviving a Legend
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Comment by Swashbuckler:
Focus seems sharpest at the back of the picture. I honestly don't get it. The club seems fairly sharp and the box in the back seems sharp, but the gauge in between isn't at all. 7 Swash

Reviving a Legend
by Cub

Comment by tab262:
nice composition

Grinding Shower
by Cub

Comment by jimmsp:
Critique Club Critique
(1) COMPOSITION (CONTENT) – Very well composed. I like the very well defined diagonal. Clearly shows the sparks in motion.
(2) BACKGROUND – The only defect I see is the bright reflection just right of center. Did you have any control of this? The dark area on the right works very well.
(3) CAMERA WORK ,TECHNICAL – Very good I like the chosen DOF which just slightly blurs the background. I don’t think more would have hurt.
(4) DIGITAL PROCESSING ,TECHNICAL – No recommended changes
(5) MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO – A very good photo. You deserve the high finish. BTW, I did a flip of this by 180 deg in PS . It makes the sparks radiate upward, changing the effect somewhat. That angle would have worked better, imho, if you could have somehow darkened the background.

Jim msp

Reviving a Legend
by Cub

Comment by PTLParsons:
Nice idea but too out of focus or if you prefer too soft of a focus. Needs a little more light and contrast. 4 is your score. PTL

Reviving a Legend
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Comment by irae:
Lots of interesting elements, but rather spoiled by the soft focus (especially in the foreground).

Reviving a Legend
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Comment by justine:
Wonderful color, maybe a bit too much for the eye to find a place to land.