bummer
by yourbuddyjhawk

Comment by ericwoo:
Interesting lighting and great toning. The various scoring on the page works well to move the viewer's eye about the frame. I think the composition would have been better served without the pointing finger. Rather, just the hand holding the page would have been sufficient. Still, nicely seen.

bummer
by yourbuddyjhawk

Comment by amandalore:
oh, ouch! nice shot, I would have liked it better with different background and also maybe if you were holding paper instead of pointing at the grade, I figure that you were probably scared of getting a DNMC if it were'nt absolutely clear what the failure was, but I would hope that most people could see the huge red F... nice work, great idea, and I hope that you just made that paper up, looks real though

bummer
by yourbuddyjhawk

Comment by KarenNfld:
Could be a bit sharper, but good concept.

bummer
by yourbuddyjhawk

Comment by BrianR:
You Failed, fits the challenge....7

bummer
by yourbuddyjhawk

Comment by cutlassdude70:
Seems slightly out of focus to me and I think the colors would have "popped" more if Levels and Color Balance were adjusted. Great concept though. :)

In the Bush
by yourbuddyjhawk

Comment by uptowngirl:
hey, i like this picture granted the blades of grass are a bit distrating but it's a good pic and it is totally still life.. just as much as anything else is

x's and o's

In the Bush
by yourbuddyjhawk

Comment by TheStick:
DNMC! - You may think its a doll (ACTION FIGURE) but when you're not looking he does move and is alive! (Just kidding!)

Very creative the one blade that cuts the pic in 1/2 is very distracting. Should have titled it "Troll hunter"

In the Bush
by yourbuddyjhawk

Comment by Elaine:
I assume you placed a toy in the grass, but it just doesn't seem like a still life shot to me.

I find the white blades of grass in the center of the shot distracting.

In the Bush
by yourbuddyjhawk

Comment by raish:
This does not meet the challenge - not inanimate and not an arranged composition of objects.

In the Bush
by yourbuddyjhawk

Comment by Claya:
Sorry, DNMC.

Main Entry: still life
Function: noun
Inflected Form(s): plural still lifes
1 : a picture consisting predominantly of inanimate objects
2 : the category of graphic arts concerned with inanimate subject matter