The Life Beyond the Tracksby
Dirt_DiverComment by pidge: Uhm - wow, this doesn't really need a critique, but hello from the critique club!
This is an interesting picture. My first instinct is to say the curves before the vanishing point may have hurt you a touch. The point is distinct, clear, and obviously meet the challenge, yet the curves create a detour bump on the way.
Composition - I wonder if you had included the tops of the trees, so this way the point wouldn't be quite as centred.
The only other critique I could offer is that the sky seems a touch unnatural. I understand the DPC aesthetic loves beautiful, saturated colours, but on my monitor, the pinks are a bit too much.
This was an excellent picture that did well with voters - congratulations on a new personal best!
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