Street Car @ Dauphine
by theonemule

Comment by ambaker:
Critique Club Review:

Focus: The building is sharp, so I gather the train is moving, as it appears to be a bit soft. You need a little more motion blur to make it clear the train is moving, to the viewer. Decent overall exposure. Had it been any more, the lights would have overpowered the piece.

The angle at which you took the picture is interesting, but in this case it makes it look like the building is falling over backwards.

Color, saturation, and hue are all done well.

I do applaud your taking the picture from the level of the tracks. Very good point of view, and works well here. Too many cameras never leave the photgrapher's eye level. Nice job.

Street Car @ Dauphine
by theonemule

Comment by littlegett:
Nice perspective. Gives a refreshing view. But, the motion blur is too little to make it look on purpose, and to much to be an acident.

Street Car @ Dauphine
by theonemule

Comment by posthumous:
great angle. you took a picture of the train's future.

Street Car @ Dauphine
by theonemule

Comment by Brad:
With some noise reduction in the sky and the full 720 pixels used, I think this would have presented itself much better overall. Good angle/perspective on this.

Street Car @ Dauphine
by theonemule

Comment by PHOTOKID:
Overall blurry in my opion, good idea and concept. nice attempt to catch motion.

Street Car @ Dauphine
by theonemule

Comment by magroves:
Would have liked to see the car in sharper focus. Interesting perspective and angles.

Street Car @ Dauphine
by theonemule

Comment by angela_packard:
Technical: The lighting is good, the contrast is good, i think if you would have gotten even more blur with the train, or a nice crisp shot, it would have been even better...the composition is what sets this image aside from others!
Creativity: very good idea!
Score: 7

Street Car @ Dauphine
by theonemule

Comment by photoslik1967:
Love this photo!

Street Car @ Dauphine
by theonemule

Comment by dr rick:
Great perspective. Good composition, lighting, and exposure. But ruined by poor focus.

Street Car @ Dauphine
by theonemule

Comment by jeannybeany:
a little too blurry for me... but nice composition