StandinginLine(Big Print)
by Yomi

Comment by Natasha:
I keep coming back to this one, I love it every time. The composition is superb!

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by Yomi

Comment by jimmyn4:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

I think this may be my first one in three weeks so I may be a little rusty. First off I really like the idea. You got in close as well. I think the two things I would do to improve this photo are lighting and subject matter. I guess that is what you call the last one. I will start with it. I think Bart alone without the Alien game piece behind him would be better and less distractive. Ok, the lighting is too yellow for me and a tad dark. I do like that it is soft though. I know sometimes it is difficult getting that happy medium of not too bright not too dark. If anything I would have tried to change the color levels of the light. Well that is really all I have. I hope that it helped you a little. Good work and good luck in future challenges.

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by Yomi

Comment by sher:
great DOF! i like the tone...bright without the washout. good job!

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by Yomi

Comment by Paulk:
I think the piece in the background is a little distracting perhaps it could have been placed away from bart I'll be intrested to see how well this one does

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by Yomi

Comment by crabappl3:
Lighing is a little yellow, but the overall shot is nice. I like your DOF and focus on the car in front. -danny

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by Yomi

Comment by margem:
I would have like the shot better if the object behind Bart weren't so prominent, it detracts from him being the focal point of the shot. maybe if the piece was replaced by a house/hotel it would have made him stand out more.

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by Yomi

Comment by joshua:
hahaha...this is a great picture! excellent use of shallow depth of field. i love the way the alien is right on bart's tail

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by Yomi

Comment by Silver Fox:
Now this is a very unusual subject to photograph. Nicely framed, good focus, nice detail on what's his name and his vehicle?

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by Yomi

Comment by sherryk471:
Well done

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by Yomi

Comment by robbieh:
Normally I don't like "staged" shots of toys and such but this is a good one. I am not sure what makes it better... depth of focus, good framing. But I do like it. Nice job.