Bountiful Temple
by Yomi

Comment by brentg3:
Lighting is great, however the whole building seems angled (probably due to your wide angle lens)

Bountiful Temple
by Yomi

Comment by ozdick:
The title suggests B, but the photo unfortunately doesn't (just says temple to me) - it's a great shot though, let down slightly by the parallax error on each side with the walls bending in.

Bountiful Temple
by Yomi

Comment by Sonifo:
I didn't say you could take a picture of my house...lol...great shot and the time of day was perfect.

Bountiful Temple
by Yomi

Comment by karmat:
I like the lighting and the fact that you didn't shoot it "head on," but it feels like it is falling off the hill and out of the frame to me.

Bountiful Temple
by Yomi

Comment by justine:
I've been there, not to the temple but to Bountiful. You did very well here, nice sunlight and shadows.

Bountiful Temple
by Yomi

Comment by hortopth:
nice light. the tilted angle doesn't work so great.

Bountiful Temple
by Yomi

Comment by pinback:
Perspective makes it look distorted - might have worked better at a different angle (more head-on). That way, you could lose the lamp, too. Like the lighting though.

Hay Now!!
by Yomi

Comment by ursula:
FROM THE CRITIQUE CLUB

Hello, Jeremy,

First impression: Nice colours. I like the sense of movement to the lanscape. It is off-centre, but it doesn't really meet the challenge "head on".

Light: Seems fine to me, even though I suspect that if you would have taken this picture either earlier or later in the day you'd have even better texture and colours. The hay in particular looks very bright on top, and very dark on the sides.

Focus: OK, but it seems just a little oversharpened?

Composition: I agree with Mariomel below that taking out the hay would make it a stronger image. Nothing is centered in this picture, and yet, the off-center aspect does not come through very strong. The hay is too small and too far to the corner to be a strong center of attention.

Overall: Nice picture, but probably not the best entry to "Off-Center". Keep going!

Ursula (uabresch)
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Hay Now!!
by Yomi

Comment by mariomel:
I think this is a wonderful image, but I find it's link to the challenge a stretch. The hay is far from the subject of attention in this shot. It actually takes away from the image IMO. Take it out, and this images is far better compostitionaly.

Hay Now!!
by Yomi

Comment by STEINR:
to me, the hey is not prominant enough to be the subject of this picture. however, i do like this photo, especailly the colors and the composition