Surprisiumby
posthumousComment by FocusPoint: Hello from Critique Club :)
I am not sure what to say about this picture. I checked your website and you do have good stuff, natural and good stuff but I must say this doesn't look like one of your work.
but anyway, let's get down the business.
I have no idea Surprisium, I think it means something about surprise?
I like 1 quarter of this photo which is standing out pretty good. I don't like the way sky, clouds and wires on the window but only the face. I am not even sure if that's your place, or someone else's, if you did have chance, I would suggest you to wait a bit more, have sun go down a bit more, darker outside and lighter inside... even a little spotlight on the face could be pretty interesting.
This photo looks like entered just to see what people would say rather than competing in the challenge.
Keep up the good work (not this, this is horrible) and show us better work of yours :)
and thanks for the great work you have done for DCP community :) we all appreciated.
Leo
Edited to fix a Word character in here :P
Message edited by author 2008-11-22 03:17:14.