American Mobility
by posthumous

Comment by sassygranny:
I might have rated higher, had there been more motion blur. My eyes went to the fence rather than the car shadow. It just didn't work for me.

don't be afraid to let them show
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Comment by Luciemac:
Shouldn't we see the subject's face?

wizardry
by posthumous

Comment by markwiley:
This was in my top three. Nicely done.

cover
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Comment by wbanning:
First the words. Turns of phrase that resonate on the harmonics of memories growing up with the sea nearby... Then the images. Sparkling abstractions and shadowy gestures of retreat swinging by the same rope.

I find it hard to respond to these images and tropes at anything beyond a viseral intuition. Impossible for critique to add or define meaning. Only to share the vague presence of salt air and indistinct sound amid the whiteness.

don't be afraid to let them show
by posthumous

Comment by skewsme:
...your true colors

wizardry
by posthumous

Comment by mariuca:
Not bad - interesting texture. I wish of a less recognizable human shadow

wizardry
by posthumous

Comment by PennyStreet:
A welcome magical image

American Mobility
by posthumous

Comment by MichaelC:
nice to see a different perspective but may be getting away from the challenge a little - 4

wizardry
by posthumous

Comment by grahamgator:
I really like this and keep coming back to it. (bumping up)

wizardry
by posthumous

Comment by markwiley:
Nicely textured creepiness.