literary original
by posthumous

Comment by purpleflutterby13:
I spent the last 5 mins flicking between the two and trying to convince myself that it is indeed the same picture.

I like the nice mist around the houses, which is missing in the final version. However, the addition of a dramatic sky in the final one is what really pulls it off. I actually really quite like both, but they're so different. A testiment to the power of post-processing.

teamminus.gif
by posthumous

Comment by purpleflutterby13:
Go Team Minus :D

Departure
by posthumous

Comment by purpleflutterby13:
Hehe, I like that bit of Central park. There's something nice and mysterious about people disappearing off into darkness.

a crazy carousel
by posthumous

Comment by purpleflutterby13:
Some nice geometry, but the light didn't seem to be on your side.

Converge
by posthumous

Comment by purpleflutterby13:
Not bad. I like how the eye follows the path and only reaches the main subject of the picture after a journey through shadows. The not-quite-symmetry and the slight tilt of the fence make that journey more curved and interesting.

roovin on a sunday afternoon
by posthumous

Comment by kelvinyam:
The exposure it out, and the highlight is clipped. The level is out too. Got to improve on the post process.

roovin on a sunday afternoon
by posthumous

Comment by neophyte:
Bump the exposure down a stop or two or hit the highlights/shadows in PS to add more pop to this. I do like the comp.

Fork-tongued Janus of Self-desire
by posthumous

Comment by boyd2000:
I'm not sure what you are going for here. It's very out of focus. It appears to be a long exposure with two flashes on the same subject, so maybe you used an incandescent light rather than a strobe, causing the blur, or maybe just minimal lighting with no flash at all? I haven't a clue what the title means. Sorry, I can't vote this highly.

roovin on a sunday afternoon
by posthumous

Comment by UNTITLED:
Since the sky is already blown out, a little more detail in the shadowed areas of the workers faces would be nice. This would make for an interesting high-key study.

roovin on a sunday afternoon
by posthumous

Comment by noraneko:
Nice triangles formed by the three guys and the roof lines. Looks underexposed, though.