Lady by the lake.
by Delta_6

Comment by Blackbox:
So dark...why?

Lady by the lake.
by Delta_6

Comment by Vonneypix:
Shadow on the face distracts. Like the relaxed style.

The Roaring Lion
by Delta_6

Comment by Ja-9:
great capture

The Roaring Lion
by Delta_6

Comment by bassbone:
very nice panning shot - the background being dark really helps accentuate the car

The Roaring Lion
by Delta_6

Comment by Nuzzer:
Dave, this just HAS to be your shot ;)

I can relate a little more now that we have the family Commodore - not an HSV more's the pity :(

Lady by the lake.
by Delta_6

Comment by rlewis:
I like this, a little fill flash on her face from the left would have helped a little

Lady by the lake.
by Delta_6

Comment by Lonni:
This has great potential, but lacks impact for some reason, and I'm trying to put my finger on what it is.

- I think the loss of detail in the dress is one thing, plus the composition is missing something.
- The edge of the lake looks like it's cutting her head off, which shouldn't make a difference but it does.
- I think the subject is the lady, and the lake has become a distracting element.
- The light is a bit harsh, creating unflattering shadows on her face
- The tonal range is a bit flat - lots of mid-greys and blacks, not many highlights.

Sorry for being critical. My own entry is flagging, and I wish people would try to help me understand why, so hopefully this is helpful to you.

Lady by the lake.
by Delta_6

Comment by photopia:
Good idea, but there's not enough contrast, and the pose doesn't cut it for me.

Lady by the lake.
by Delta_6

Comment by Rainbow-Coloured-Soul:
Good lightning and great model. Her legs look lovely in this - they're set off by the nice shoes! A good pose and nice composition.

Lady by the lake.
by Delta_6

Comment by klkitchens:
ok shot... good lighting. Though the spot on her nose, I assume is a booger ring, is a distraction.