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| 05/13/2007 09:56:42 PM |
Clematis: Symmetry 2X Concentricby 777STANComment by sfalice: Greetings from the Critique Club
Lovely clematis. You found one in great shape and photographed it well. I will say it is pretty well saturated, and I sure wouldn't want to see it any more saturated.
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But I will suggest that the depth of field might have been a little more shallow to afford more background blurring. The twigs and greenery behind the beautiful flower are a distraction, but had they been blurred out a bit, they would have offered a nice, colorful foil to the flower. Of course, that's just my take on it...
You have a nice image here, one that I'm pleased to have had the opportunity to look at more closely.
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| 05/07/2007 12:55:50 PM |
Honeysuckle Bloomsby 777STANComment by karmat: CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
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Overall, this is a very interesting effect you have achieved here. I like the little parts of bright color and I think it really helps to bring out the orange tones of the flowers. My first though was to go completely black and white in the background, but the more I think of that, the less I think I would like it. What I do think is distracting is that the shot emphasized in color on the left and right are not in focus. In a "regular" shot, this would not be an issue, the eyes would simply seek out that which was focused. Here, though, they drift to the colored parts, and 2/3 of them are out of focus, so it kind of takes away from the rest of the shot.
I think the shot is a bit busy, as well. Perhaps if you could have isolated the blooms a bit more without so much in the background it might have helped to define your subject a bit more clearly.
Again, I like the shot, and I was actually one of the higher voters on it. I think you had a great idea, and it could be a truly effective eye pleasing shot if just a couple of minor things were different.
If I need to clarify or explain myself further, please feel free to contact me.
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| 05/06/2007 03:46:59 AM |
Honeysuckle Bloomsby 777STANComment by levyj413: I think this is too many boundaries. Maybe it'd work better without the vertical lines? I like the selectively edited sections and how they climb up to the right. |
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