Just one piece...
by Djabordjabor

Comment by LaughJockey:
ha! i love this image! the look on his face epitomizes anger and defeat. nice job.

Just one piece...
by Djabordjabor

Comment by temba:
Great interpretation of the theme! This fits perfectly. Good image too - definitely one of my top scoring pictures.

The hot sunset
by Djabordjabor

Comment by pacpinto:
Actually a nice pic. However I think it doesn't convey heat... And the silhouettes of the rocks play a part in it. They give a shadowy sense to the pic.

Just one piece...
by Djabordjabor

Comment by ReM_Fr:
great shot ! I hoped to see such photo in this challenge, and you did it to perfection !

Just one piece...
by Djabordjabor

Comment by MTPixels:
Try a new invention next time... It's called glue! lol Great capture, pose, lighting, and background. I like this one.

The Shop Assistant
by Djabordjabor

Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
A truely underrated and fantastic entry into this challenge.

Composition:
person on thirds .. yt is does seem contrived .. the building up of candy and mags is just like I think it should be for this type of shop.

Subject:
Meets the challenge extremely well.

Technical (Colour and light):
Flourescent (I think that is above the person) is hard .. and here it worked ... good sharp colours and lovely movement capture.

To grow its vote?:
I ahve no idea but your commentors did .. re engaging the person etc .. I think it would like fake personally .. I think it is great as it is.

Summary:
You have an awesome eye ... keep up the work.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

Just one piece...
by Djabordjabor

Comment by FireBird:
Nice action.

Just one piece...
by Djabordjabor

Comment by Ragga2000:
hope you did not have to shoot this more then once :o) Very good lightning, sharpness and concept... well done.

The hot sunset
by Djabordjabor

Comment by jdannels:
A beautiful calm shot, but the colors of the sunset seem to be very cool. Still a 7 in my book though.

Happiness
by Djabordjabor

Comment by Bear_Music:
My GAWD: if I'd known you were this much of a lunatic I might have thought twice :-)