park tryst
by blackenedwhite

Comment by tate:
I like the feeling here. Good composition. The moment is captured nicely. The soft noise reduction? works well here. 7

park tryst
by blackenedwhite

Comment by lucienaw:
digital cameras always have trouble coping with dark scenes, try and avoid photographing a direct source of light to prevent that 'faded' effect. Nice shot though (7)

park tryst
by blackenedwhite

Comment by kiumars_kashani:
nice and soft

park tryst
by blackenedwhite

Comment by WickedB:
A little too much neat image, but nice lighting.

park tryst
by blackenedwhite

Comment by Jovi:
Very nice, a little too soft for my taste though. Oh, is that at Intramuros?

Sinulog Festival
by blackenedwhite

Comment by DigiFotoBuddy:
Greetings from your own critique club.

First Impression
Nice shot.
Composition:
Composition is good. The flag the guy is holding up the face is very distracting and takes everything away for the picture and theme of rhythm.
Subject:
Not the best subject for this challenge.
Technical (Colour and light):
Good color, lighting and DOF. Building in the back is little bit blown out.
Improvement:
Better composition and timing. I think you did not shot this picture with the rhythm in mind. I would have avoided the building in the back and just took the people for the rhythm shot.
Summary:
Congratulations on your PB, I am sure you are on right track and this will not stay your Personal best for long.

Best of luck for the future challenges.

park tryst
by blackenedwhite

Comment by Rebecca:
I think this would work better if the light were cropped out. It's very distracting.

park tryst
by blackenedwhite

Comment by rennie:
Very original picture in this challenge. Very few people shots. The girl is captured perfectly. If not the slight blur I would say it is a top 5 picture (or maybe even with the small blur it is?). Good luck with this one. 9.

park tryst
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Comment by igamera:
mabait ako eh.
translation: i gave you a 10. :p

park tryst
by blackenedwhite

Comment by TraumaHound:
Nice photo. Pleasant change from all the architecture and bridges. Has a great candid feel to it. The very bright light in the background is a bit distracting.