Dessert- Chocolate Lovers Beware
by Sunshine86

Comment by jorr:
I like this one a lot. Nicely done and very tempting. I like the fact that the plate is angled and the lighting works well. IMO, I think just a slightly lower angle, but still from the top would have shown the height better and added to the picture. Of course that is only my opinion. Well done and good luck

Dessert- Chocolate Lovers Beware
by Sunshine86

Comment by skewsme:
I bet this is tasty.. maybe stick a fork in it.

Ladder to the Shadows
by Sunshine86

Comment by alanfreed:
What a cool little corner! One of my top picks for the challenge.

Dessert- Chocolate Lovers Beware
by Sunshine86

Comment by kteach:
Great presentation... looks delicious!!

Dessert- Chocolate Lovers Beware
by Sunshine86

Comment by lmalins:
Nice decoration, but the overal presentation of this is not very well thought out. Lighting is medicore, and the shot could of been taken from a lower angle.

Dessert- Chocolate Lovers Beware
by Sunshine86

Comment by climbin2thetop:
i like the shot, it just needs a little more depth.

Dessert- Chocolate Lovers Beware
by Sunshine86

Comment by Beach_mel:
Excellent setup, and YUMMY something about the cropping isn't sitting well with me and I think the weave of the table cloth is a bit distracting.

Ladder to the Shadows
by Sunshine86

Comment by obsidian:
striking for sure

Out of the Ordinary
by Sunshine86

Comment by jmsetzler:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

This image has an interesting abstract feel to it. It's a nice technique-drive image with a twist of surrealism at the same time :) The color play also works ok here. I'm not as keen on the blue fade from the center of the image to the right side. I believe you could probably work this image into something a little stronger in the realm of colors. Blue is not as complementary of red as green would be. In a nutshell, I really like the idea and have actually been thinking about something along these lines for my own portfolio.

As for the challenge, I notice that the score on this image is OK but not outstanding. The theme of 'shapes' is not really the dominant theme of this image. When one thinks of shapes, the general view would be shapes with definition, like a triangle, rectangle, circle, or diamond. The shapes that dominate this image are random curves, which none-the-less, are shapes. The feeling I get from this image is more along the lines of texture than shape probably.

I think this subject/technique is well worth some further experimentation... keep up the good work :)

John Setzler

Dessert- Chocolate Lovers Beware
by Sunshine86

Comment by mhanson:
Seems a bit out of focus to me? Maybe the depth of field is too shallow?