The Signs of Sorrow come from the eyes
by Krisby

Comment by Ben:
This is a good shot. I like the angle, the pose and the crop. Like your title says, it's all in the eyes!
And you have great eyes which are clearly highlighted by everything else being black.

Nice setup, nice shot.
Well done.

Still in action after 101 years
by Krisby

Comment by moniepenny:
Hello from the Critique Club!

Well Krisby, I must say your work has greatly improved the past few months and I am quite impressed with this shot.

I really like the old feeling of this, it adds emotion to a shot of a building, which is an accomplishment in itself.

I see some noise in the sky, using a little neatimage could reduce that. Also there are some glowing edges around the pointed tops of the buildings that are a distraction. I think toning them down would help.

There is a tutorial on dodging and burning on this site that you could look into. If you go slightly easier on the levels, and the dodge the building a bit, you should be able to get the brightness and the details without blowing out the sky.

I like the perspective, it's interesting and leads the eye beyond the building, which makes viewers think for a second instead of just taking a quick glance.

Don't let the 5.3 get you down, I personally feel that this deserves closer to a 6 than that. Good work. It's nice to see you experimenting.

-Monica

Reanimation, improved or not?
by Krisby

Comment by jerowe:
lot better. lot greater focus, and well caught motion :) 7

Reanimation, improved or not?
by Krisby

Comment by hotpasta:
GREAT SHOT! haven't seen the original, but this looks fantastic and I hope you do well with this, good luck

Reanimation, improved or not?
by Krisby

Comment by rayg544:
This is a very appealing shot - I don't really know why, I just like it alot! 9

Reanimation, improved or not?
by Krisby

Comment by Joey Lawrence:
I recognize this :-)
Definatly an improvement!

Still in action after 101 years
by Krisby

Comment by ArpeggioAngel:
This does feel a bit like an old postcard. It has that "weathered" feeling to it.

The Sunshine's Eclipse Window
by Krisby

Comment by ArpeggioAngel:
Nice use of leading lines...the shadow on the floor leads you to the window. I like the fact that it is not exactly level, I think the slight tilt adds to the photo rather than detracts from it.

Julia: Her hair of floating sky is shimmering, glimmering, in the sun.
by Krisby

Comment by bookworm:
nice lighting, good expression tells a lot

dimiso 040b1.jpg
by Krisby

Comment by Lerin:
haha this is awesome
nice expression
it loos like you snuck in on a secret conversation