Making progress with my model photography
by Pixlmaker

Comment by Blackbox:
Ummm...isn't that kind of selfish self promotion? I'd have cropped all of the ear and left a little more under the pinky. Some stray hairs...cut them too.

Making progress with my model photography
by Pixlmaker

Comment by Melethia:
Nice lighting and pose; lovely model. Tie-in to the challenge is very title-dependent.

Making progress with my model photography
by Pixlmaker

Comment by violinist123:
Making progress with my ability to see how any photo can be titled to squeak by the challenge description.

Making progress with my model photography
by Pixlmaker

Comment by hotpasta:
good luck with your modeling future...lovely shot, perhaps some of the stray hair is a little distracting, but I love the lighting and catchlights...oh and by the way, you are pretty

Making progress with my model photography
by Pixlmaker

Comment by AJR1:
Cute. The front bunch of strands is a little split up in sections unfortunately.

Still cute!

Making progress with my model photography
by Pixlmaker

Comment by owen:
I'm having trouble getting my shoes on lately would you have anything handy to help? ;~) Sorry to be a smarty but without seeing your previous modelling shots the viewercannot relate to the progress spoken of in your title. Other than that it's a good shot. Good crop, different angle which is OK and a good from your model expression. Lighting is very slightly too strong on the left and a bit shadowy on the right but not by a lot.

Making progress with my model photography
by Pixlmaker

Comment by zheka:
Those thin hairs on the lips and left eye are distracting.

Making progress with my model photography
by Pixlmaker

Comment by cwalmye:
It's a good shot, great perspective and all, but you could use some serious work on your lighting. Looks like you're using a soft-box...ok, softboxes are good. But you could be much more creative with the way that shadows are cast on the models face.

Making progress with my model photography
by Pixlmaker

Comment by rpwsrw:
pretty face. the hairs around the lips are distracting. 7

Making progress with my model photography
by Pixlmaker

Comment by Nald:
Amazing portrait, those eyes just draw you into the shot. My only suggestions would be to clone out the few distracting hairs (I know your limited here) and maybe crop out the remaining part of her ear. Well done!