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07/18/2006 11:16:15 AM |
| Good very realistic, and not over done |
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07/17/2006 03:41:12 AM |
| A bit overlit from the left but I love the model expression, quite suggestive. |
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07/16/2006 11:45:35 AM |
Hrm. I read this "Making Progress with my Model" Photography the first time...
Certainly looks like it in her eyes... :) |
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07/15/2006 06:47:41 PM |
| Ummm...isn't that kind of selfish self promotion? I'd have cropped all of the ear and left a little more under the pinky. Some stray hairs...cut them too. |
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07/15/2006 06:12:09 PM |
| Nice lighting and pose; lovely model. Tie-in to the challenge is very title-dependent. |
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07/13/2006 09:44:27 AM |
| Making progress with my ability to see how any photo can be titled to squeak by the challenge description. |
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07/13/2006 07:19:47 AM |
| good luck with your modeling future...lovely shot, perhaps some of the stray hair is a little distracting, but I love the lighting and catchlights...oh and by the way, you are pretty |
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07/13/2006 03:37:50 AM |
Cute. The front bunch of strands is a little split up in sections unfortunately.
Still cute! |
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07/12/2006 10:47:16 PM |
| I'm having trouble getting my shoes on lately would you have anything handy to help? ;~) Sorry to be a smarty but without seeing your previous modelling shots the viewercannot relate to the progress spoken of in your title. Other than that it's a good shot. Good crop, different angle which is OK and a good from your model expression. Lighting is very slightly too strong on the left and a bit shadowy on the right but not by a lot. |
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07/12/2006 03:53:36 PM |
| Those thin hairs on the lips and left eye are distracting. |
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07/12/2006 03:52:42 PM |
| It's a good shot, great perspective and all, but you could use some serious work on your lighting. Looks like you're using a soft-box...ok, softboxes are good. But you could be much more creative with the way that shadows are cast on the models face. |
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07/12/2006 02:03:56 PM |
| pretty face. the hairs around the lips are distracting. 7 |
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07/12/2006 11:39:03 AM |
| Amazing portrait, those eyes just draw you into the shot. My only suggestions would be to clone out the few distracting hairs (I know your limited here) and maybe crop out the remaining part of her ear. Well done! |
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07/12/2006 12:46:06 AM |
| Nice photo but I have to vote it down to a 5 as the link to the topic is a bit tenuous! |
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07/12/2006 12:20:25 AM |
Kind of stretching the intent of the challenge, I think.
A very interesting photo, though. Intimate composition enhances the effect of the model's expression.
The light on her right side is maybe just a little hot. |
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