Dreams of Flight
by sarrobi

Comment by mahobbes:
Beautiful sillohuette. I like the blues in the background and the shady corners. 8

One
by sarrobi

Comment by fotomann_forever:
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::

Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.

First Impression - the most important one:
I like it! Very nice detail.

Composition:
Not as strong as it could be. Having the raspberry near dead-center isn't exactly a strong composition. Having it off to one side of the photo would have been much stronger.

Subject:
Clear, crisp .. good

Technical (Colour, focus, and light):
Focus: Perfect. Very sharp.
Colour: Also, perfect.
Light: Once again, perfect.

To grow its vote?:
More than likely, a stronger composition would have gained a few points for you. Also, this was a fairly tough challenge and you scored admirably in it.

Summary:
Good job on this entry, you scored well with a well executed shot.

Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy

Cancer
by sarrobi

Comment by kloutit:
great. beautiful shot. wherre are its nippers? and what is the sign?

Cancer
by sarrobi

Comment by srugolo:
Nice colors and subject. Good luck. 8

Dreams of Flight
by sarrobi

Comment by hotpasta:
yes, i dream this too...love the colours...reminds me of Jonothan livingstone Seagull!

Dreams of Flight
by sarrobi

Comment by Stagolee:
Nice capture and concept. I little bit of fringeing around the bird is a let down

Cancer
by sarrobi

Comment by Melethia:
Excellent interpretation of the challenge; perfect lighting, depth of field.

Cancer
by sarrobi

Comment by Pensive:
Wonderful contrast of color, yet there is continuity within the image. "Sign" may be a stretch.

Cancer
by sarrobi

Comment by jorr:
Took me a minute to get this one, without the title I would have been lost. Nice capture, good focus, and fits the challnge well. Good luck

Cancer
by sarrobi

Comment by sherpet:
This is a great image, so well done, just great.....