Barrier
by sarn

Comment by Jammur:
Fine example of man-made camouflage. Truly interesting shot, since focus is on the objects within the barrier, which we can not distinguish because of the camouflage.

Barrier
by sarn

Comment by chet:
The fact that this is out of foucs hurts my eyes.

Waikiki
by sarn

Comment by Lenny_D:
Photo is a bit untidy for me, there doesn't seem to be a clear theme. Sorry.

Waikiki
by sarn

Comment by popdeepop:
Color. And location. Beach?

Waikiki
by sarn

Comment by Antanas:
Lucky you - it's not possible to spoil such a beauty, so you are way on a safe side taking a picture of it.

Waikiki
by sarn

Comment by cosmic:
Nice composition; however, you're in Wakiki! lol There has to be some more scenic things there than the top of houses?

Waikiki
by sarn

Comment by neenee1999:
Beautiful view, I love the swaying palms.

A Delicate Age
by sarn

Comment by OneSweetSin:
Greetings from the Critique Club

Very nice capture of expression and the black and white work well for this photo.

Your biggest problem here is the graininess. It doesn't add to the portrait but rather takes away. I

The other issue I notice is the glare in the glasses it seems to make both eyes look like two holes rather than eyes.

Its little things that make the difference in scores and this is a prime example of the little things. Your composition is good and your choice of black and white work well but it was the little things that hurt you.

Anna

Caught in Action!
by sarn

Comment by GreenGiant:
I dont feel this is very attractive, however I do think this technic can be useful with more practice!

Caught in Action!
by sarn

Comment by Elaine:
I think that the background should be in focus, and I find the glare distracting.