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11/04/2005 09:02:54 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Very nice capture of expression and the black and white work well for this photo.
Your biggest problem here is the graininess. It doesn't add to the portrait but rather takes away. I
The other issue I notice is the glare in the glasses it seems to make both eyes look like two holes rather than eyes.
Its little things that make the difference in scores and this is a prime example of the little things. Your composition is good and your choice of black and white work well but it was the little things that hurt you.
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10/31/2005 09:53:13 PM |
| Delicate age. This picture looks a bit grainy. It could use a little more contrast to give it visual interest. |
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10/31/2005 03:57:33 PM |
| I love Granny's expression. I would have liked to see better focus, especially on the eyes - they usually tell the story. |
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10/28/2005 11:05:28 PM |
| the photo would have been a lot stronger had the woman been in focus. good job not centering the subject. maybe have a less busy background next time. |
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10/27/2005 03:04:40 PM |
| good idea, but too much noise on the photo |
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10/27/2005 02:37:27 PM |
| Good idea, bad execution. It is way too grainy/noisy and background is very distracting. |
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10/27/2005 10:02:26 AM |
| out of focus and visually busy background make this hard to give a good score to - I'll bet she has great stories to tell |
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10/26/2005 06:49:04 PM |
| extremely soft focus to the point of blurry and very blown highlights |
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10/26/2005 12:12:27 PM |
| this looks a bit grany and out of focus.. |
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10/26/2005 10:31:24 AM |
| Needs to be a lot sharper, otherwise a good shot |
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