Walking Towards Eternal Light
by abhra

Comment by Canadian_eh:
Nice, really like the feeling

Summer Bath (unfortunately its already summer in some parts of India)
by abhra

Comment by mpeters:
Hi from the Critique Club. HOpefully I can offer a few thoughts on your photo which you will find valuable.

Composition: This picture needs a portrait orientation to show more of the bather's hands and to crop out the man on the right. Or a shift in camera viewpoint could have accomplished this.

Technical: Focus is soft on subject and water. Most people would be OK with the blurred water but they would find a sharper subject more appealing. Probably shoot for minimum 1/250 shutter speed. Exposure looks good and BW is a good choice.

Challenge: The title is long and "summer bath" would have been sufficient with out the explanation. For most voters, this entry was probably a stretch for them to connect to comfort. LIving in a place with hot summers I can tell you that I would find comfort in a cold shower!! Work on some of the things I listed above and watch your vote grow.

After looking at your profile page, I see you like black and white They are very nice pictures and I would love to see you enter a picture with some bold color? I have not been to INdia, but I picture it as a country full of color.

Keep shooting.

Mark

Please PM me with any questions or comments.

Walking Towards Eternal Light
by abhra

Comment by Kaups:
Cool setup and idea - just don't like the lack of focus in the foreground.

Walking Towards Eternal Light
by abhra

Comment by bseifipour:
A little too blurry.

Walking Towards Eternal Light
by abhra

Comment by JamD:
Too blurry

Walking Towards Eternal Light
by abhra

Comment by popdeepop:
Didn't think of walking. I always think of being free of gravity. I like the bw and the light.

Walking Towards Eternal Light
by abhra

Comment by hotpasta:
nice shot, I like the moodiness

Summer Bath (unfortunately its already summer in some parts of India)
by abhra

Comment by facesastheycome:
nice work ,capturing the momnt tops

Summer Bath (unfortunately its already summer in some parts of India)
by abhra

Comment by Nyck:
gr8 pic love the water spray!

Summer Bath (unfortunately its already summer in some parts of India)
by abhra

Comment by BeeCee:
Like the b&w, but out of focus a bit.