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Summer Bath (unfortunately its already summer in some parts of  India)
Summer Bath (unfortunately its already summer in some parts of India)
abhra


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Comfort (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Olympus C-370Z
Location: Kolkata,India.
Date: Feb 25, 2006
Aperture: F 4.5
ISO: 64
Shutter: 1/106 sec
Galleries: Black and White, Water
Date Uploaded: Feb 27, 2006

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Statistics
Place: 159 out of 253
Avg (all users): 4.8805
Avg (commenters): 5.0000
Avg (participants): 4.6974
Avg (non-participants): 4.9733
Views since voting: 739
Views during voting: 347
Votes: 226
Comments: 7
Favorites: 0


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03/11/2006 04:59:25 PM
Hi from the Critique Club. HOpefully I can offer a few thoughts on your photo which you will find valuable.

Composition: This picture needs a portrait orientation to show more of the bather's hands and to crop out the man on the right. Or a shift in camera viewpoint could have accomplished this.

Technical: Focus is soft on subject and water. Most people would be OK with the blurred water but they would find a sharper subject more appealing. Probably shoot for minimum 1/250 shutter speed. Exposure looks good and BW is a good choice.

Challenge: The title is long and "summer bath" would have been sufficient with out the explanation. For most voters, this entry was probably a stretch for them to connect to comfort. LIving in a place with hot summers I can tell you that I would find comfort in a cold shower!! Work on some of the things I listed above and watch your vote grow.

After looking at your profile page, I see you like black and white They are very nice pictures and I would love to see you enter a picture with some bold color? I have not been to INdia, but I picture it as a country full of color.

Keep shooting.

Mark

Please PM me with any questions or comments.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/05/2006 01:44:03 PM
nice work ,capturing the momnt tops
03/04/2006 08:50:55 AM
gr8 pic love the water spray!
03/03/2006 02:20:42 PM
Like the b&w, but out of focus a bit.
03/01/2006 08:24:20 PM
Would have been great with faster shutter speed.
03/01/2006 02:00:43 PM
Overall photo is blurry, not just the moving water and arms.
03/01/2006 12:45:07 AM
nice!


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