Running track
by pauljapan

Comment by Elaine:
I think this would have fit the challenge better had you been on the ground and captured her as she was running by you.

Running track
by pauljapan

Comment by wavelength:
well, ground, but sidways, not really up. Usually, it's best to leave a moving object room to move. Your runner is leaving, the brain wants to know what so great off camera. The even weight between the track, and theupper part is a little ordinary. Gives too much weight to the ground as a subject, especially with the way bright highlight down on the bottom. Combination of the white line, runner, and bright green lawn going to the right make the whole picture seem off balance.

Sorry to be slightly harsh, but people complain when you don't comment. These were my thoughts. What you do with them is your decision.

Running track
by pauljapan

Comment by Drummerjd356:
you shouldn't have taken the picture with flash