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Running track
Running track
pauljapan


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: From the Ground Up II (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Sony DSC-W1
Location: Auckland
Date: Sep 21, 2005
Aperture: not sure
ISO: auto
Shutter: not sure
Galleries: Sports, Landscape
Date Uploaded: Sep 26, 2005

taken in Auckland,New Zealand.

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Place: 238 out of 326
Avg (all users): 4.6048
Avg (commenters): 3.6667
Avg (participants): 4.4902
Avg (non-participants): 4.7130
Views since voting: 731
Views during voting: 270
Votes: 210
Comments: 7
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/03/2005 10:59:37 PM
might be stronger image if horizon placed lower in frame, too much red in foreground IMO
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10/03/2005 08:49:57 PM
might have been more powerful if you had the runner coming directly at the camera.
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10/01/2005 12:10:30 PM
Nice color and sharpness in the distance and on the runner. Might work bett if runn was heading into the image vs out of it though?
09/30/2005 09:42:02 AM
What would have been really cool is if you had gotten a lot of people running, like at the start of a race.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/29/2005 04:36:07 PM
I think this would have fit the challenge better had you been on the ground and captured her as she was running by you.
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09/28/2005 06:57:19 PM
well, ground, but sidways, not really up. Usually, it's best to leave a moving object room to move. Your runner is leaving, the brain wants to know what so great off camera. The even weight between the track, and theupper part is a little ordinary. Gives too much weight to the ground as a subject, especially with the way bright highlight down on the bottom. Combination of the white line, runner, and bright green lawn going to the right make the whole picture seem off balance.

Sorry to be slightly harsh, but people complain when you don't comment. These were my thoughts. What you do with them is your decision.
09/28/2005 02:45:15 PM
you shouldn't have taken the picture with flash


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