distortion
by Drummie

Comment by vtruan:
brownie may be yours

Bunny Art
by Drummie

Comment by loseme:
*Critique Club*

"Bunny Art" is a nice entry into the Children's Toy challenge. I like the idea, having a child's toy creating something of the real world. This was a tough category with so many different toys out there to choose from.

I think your placement of the subject is good a lillte off center so that everything can be taken in. Unfortunately the lighting is a bit harsh. Possibly it was a flash used in a dark environemnet. You might try using a couple different lights and some reflectors. Even natural light migh balance out the piece a little more even though it usually creates a bunc of shadwos. Lighting is one of the hardest aspect of photography for myself. I also like how your focus is on the bunny not the pencils or the art piece.

I think you have the idea and creativity and looking at your portfolio you have some great work. Keep up the good work and I look forward to your future entries.

Bunny Art
by Drummie

Comment by oanav:
I like the ideea and it looks carefully composed; you should work on the lighting part, that camera flash just ruins the image. studio lights are a bit complicated but far a small and still composition like that the light of a desk lamp and a tripod for the camera would work; or you could have used some soft natural light from a window. good luck

complexity
by Drummie

Comment by vtruan:
a bit too straight on. Try at an angle next time.

Bunny Art
by Drummie

Comment by GrayGhost:
Nice idea, arrangement, and composition. Image just suffers from harsh on-camera flash lighting. For a set shot, multiple off-camera lights would be better.

Bunny Art
by Drummie

Comment by uptowngirl:
very clever i like this one alot.. too cute.. those are some sweet shoes on that bunny

desperation
by Drummie

Comment by Drummie:
This photo was to portray the end of a marriage & the desperation that is felt at the time. The object on the floor is a pill bottle, and the woman is slouched & leaning against the wall, heartbreaking, while removing her wedding ring.

desperation
by Drummie

Comment by Sherri1209:
Simple, Soft and lovely .....well done

desperation
by Drummie

Comment by Tammer:
I think you have indeed caught of feeling of desperation, it's very emotive. Some of the whites seem a bit overblown to me, but that's just me.

desperation
by Drummie

Comment by echo54:
neat