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04/18/2006 03:57:02 PM |
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"Bunny Art" is a nice entry into the Children's Toy challenge. I like the idea, having a child's toy creating something of the real world. This was a tough category with so many different toys out there to choose from.
I think your placement of the subject is good a lillte off center so that everything can be taken in. Unfortunately the lighting is a bit harsh. Possibly it was a flash used in a dark environemnet. You might try using a couple different lights and some reflectors. Even natural light migh balance out the piece a little more even though it usually creates a bunc of shadwos. Lighting is one of the hardest aspect of photography for myself. I also like how your focus is on the bunny not the pencils or the art piece.
I think you have the idea and creativity and looking at your portfolio you have some great work. Keep up the good work and I look forward to your future entries. |
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04/08/2006 10:01:02 AM |
| I like the ideea and it looks carefully composed; you should work on the lighting part, that camera flash just ruins the image. studio lights are a bit complicated but far a small and still composition like that the light of a desk lamp and a tripod for the camera would work; or you could have used some soft natural light from a window. good luck |
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04/07/2006 11:07:19 PM |
| Nice idea, arrangement, and composition. Image just suffers from harsh on-camera flash lighting. For a set shot, multiple off-camera lights would be better. |
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04/06/2006 01:25:22 PM |
| very clever i like this one alot.. too cute.. those are some sweet shoes on that bunny |
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