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Comment by banmorn:
Marvelous tones and motion....how happy she looks and a beautiful day for her to look so happy....GREAT BOKEH!

Message edited by author 2007-09-02 23:53:53.

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Comment by jmagrino:
First thing I thought of was a setting out West somewhere. Barn door, jeans, faded number shirt... great shot!

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Comment by sonygirl:
Love it!!! :)

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Comment by trevytrev:
I will agree that the white strip on the right distracts from you lovely model. Her face does seem like it's a bit shadowed as well.

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Comment by Node:
Hey nice shot, nice model she is very relaxed and has a great smile.

Now what would I change, well unlike the others i don't really like the background door especially the hinge on the RH side, the texture of the door could be great and if you moved your model a pace or two forward from the door the background would become OOF and soften. The lighting is just not enough on her LH side as we look at it as her eye is blending with the eye socket area, you could try using some sort of reflector (White sheet of cardboard or I like those twisty silver car sun protectors) to bounce some of the light back. Hope this helps.

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Comment by hajeka:
Lovely smile. Who is she? Tooo bad she wasn't a little to the left, so you could crop that white stripe on the right.

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Comment by sfalice:
You put this attractive little girl in front of a perfect setting.
Nice work. She'll treasure this one.

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Comment by ephln:
Lovely contrasts. Great smile!

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Comment by abranton:
Very sweet - I like the gated looking background :)

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Comment by sherpet:
Love her sweet smile, and a very nice candid indeed.....