Purple Formal
by 4forfun

Comment by DelRioPhoto:
Well, she is certainly a beautiful model, I just think you could have done a little better metering the light. If her face was a little sharper it would help too. The wall is grey, so I think if you used a grey card here and metered off the card, you would have been able to get the wall to whiten up and this adding more contrast in the picture. The thing she's holding above her head is a little unidentifiable, so it might be taking away from the shot. I think if it were just her arms over her head it would be a far better shot. Anyway, nice attempt and try a little better light metering and lighting next time and a little more sharpness and I think you'll nail it. Nice going.

Purple Formal
by 4forfun

Comment by dleach:
lighting is flat?

Purple Formal
by 4forfun

Comment by swankFoto:
spot on wall is distracting but good pose from model

Purple Formal
by 4forfun

Comment by love:
would have used a better background...stain on wall is distracting.

Purple Formal
by 4forfun

Comment by Majanka:
Too close to the background, I don'like the gey. And red eyes, nope no fashion. I'm sorry. Like the dress aand your model they have potential.

Purple Formal
by 4forfun

Comment by ddng:
The line down the left is distracting.

Purple Formal
by 4forfun

Comment by A_Acolyte:
Beautiful model. Bleak lighting

Celebrate all 16 years of youth and punk rock
by 4forfun

Comment by hanneke:
this one really rocks ;)

Mountains Majesty
by 4forfun

Comment by yanko:
Judging the image by itself I like the way you cropped this. It's not the typical way of shooting mountain ranges. However given the theme of this challenge and especially your title this should have shown more of the mountains. As is their stature/majesty is reduced.

Celebrate all 16 years of youth and punk rock
by 4forfun

Comment by Maverick:
Treatment fits well with a punk rock theme, though the focus could be a little stronger on the foreground subject.