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02/28/2006 09:50:51 PM |
| Your model has red eye. This looks more like a snapshot than a fashion shot.....too centered, poor lighting and no definition of the clothing. |
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02/27/2006 04:55:32 PM |
| The cropping could've been a little different. I like the idea though :) |
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02/27/2006 01:59:23 AM |
| Good pose, lighting, could benefit from a tight crop? |
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02/26/2006 11:03:48 PM |
| I like the lighting and the pose. I might have tried framing a little lower so we see more of the torso and the hands are nearer the top of the frame. The line at right (a corner?) is a bit distracting. I like the movement of the cloth trailing from the hands, too. |
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02/25/2006 08:11:11 PM |
| The lighting needs to be stronger in this. It's very flat, and it's a shame, because I love the model and the pose. There seems to be a bit of red eye as well. Adjusting the levels in photoshop could really make this a killer image. |
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02/25/2006 02:31:44 PM |
| To much empty space ... maybe you should have the model to lower her right hand also... just my 5 cents |
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02/24/2006 01:46:37 PM |
| Good model, some very nice aspects. But needs better background. (Blotch is distracting). Needs better lighting. And the red-eye needs fixing. |
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02/23/2006 10:23:14 PM |
| For me, this might work better had her body been more partially turned to the camera rather than a straight side shot. Also, the line down the right hand side is very distracting, along with the dark spot by her raised arm. |
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02/23/2006 07:23:54 PM |
| that girl is to jung to be posing like that! |
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02/23/2006 12:27:11 AM |
| naughty and saucy... very well done - kudos to the model |
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02/23/2006 12:16:23 AM |
| Well, she is certainly a beautiful model, I just think you could have done a little better metering the light. If her face was a little sharper it would help too. The wall is grey, so I think if you used a grey card here and metered off the card, you would have been able to get the wall to whiten up and this adding more contrast in the picture. The thing she's holding above her head is a little unidentifiable, so it might be taking away from the shot. I think if it were just her arms over her head it would be a far better shot. Anyway, nice attempt and try a little better light metering and lighting next time and a little more sharpness and I think you'll nail it. Nice going. |
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02/22/2006 12:45:26 PM |
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02/22/2006 11:04:47 AM |
| spot on wall is distracting but good pose from model |
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02/22/2006 07:14:21 AM |
| would have used a better background...stain on wall is distracting. |
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02/22/2006 04:23:23 AM |
| Too close to the background, I don'like the gey. And red eyes, nope no fashion. I'm sorry. Like the dress aand your model they have potential. |
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02/22/2006 04:10:04 AM |
| The line down the left is distracting. |
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02/22/2006 02:01:05 AM |
| Beautiful model. Bleak lighting |
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